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How to inprove children's ability in the music appreciation,has become an important topic which the current music educational reform faces.
For the expierent through the univercity studying and the musical teaching practice,I realized that, the music appreciates can improves children's comprehensive quality to have following five aspectsfunction:
First, through listening the famous works,music will inprove our esthetic ability; Second, through the way to memory the music subject, may gave us the feeling ability of the music; Third, through the teaching, would enhances the innovation thought and the creation ability; Fourth, through the music appreciation,may help to built children's ersonal character; Fifth, through analysis the famous person's work, may give the children more education on musical,and tell them how to enjoy themselves.

说真的，你的中文太牵强了，翻译成英文，简直是……

How to raise the overall quality of the students during teaching music is an important issue in the current reform of the educational system in music teaching. During my four academic years of studying and practicing in teaching music, I apprehend that music appreciation contributes greatly to raise the overall quality of the students in following five aspects: first, improving the aesthetic standards and faculties by listening to music; second, enhancing the notional comprehensive of music by remembering the music themes; third, strengthening innovative thinking and capability of innovation by teaching music appreciation; forth, cultivating of virtues by appreciating music; fifth, expanding the scope of cultural vision and enriching cultural refinement of music by analyzing the compositions.

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