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In most people's memories, (+the) vampire is a kind of animal which is grace but bloody.They can live for a really long time , maybe even immortal. They are beautiful ,and they have formidable __(自我修复能力)__.
But I don't care about(换for) these things. I pay my attention to theirs(-s) teeth. Each of them have(改为has) two laniaries(换为canine teeth） in their mouse.(+s） They are pointed, so they can pierce into people's skin to drink blood. But, imagine that, a vampire teethe its laniaries (去掉its laniaries ）in a wrong place——in the front of the mouse, just like a rabbit, how funny it will be! Then , maybe that vampire feels unhappy because of its laniaries(换为canine teeth）, so it goes to see the dendist, and starts to wear a tooth socket. Oh~ I think no one would like to give any blood to him.

首先，animal要用复数，加s.

each of ……后应用has，然后animal＋s

Self-repairing ability自我修复能力
theirs teeth---their teeth 名词性物主代词=形容词性物主代词+名词
a vampire teethe its laniaries in a wrong place ---a vampire who has a disorderly teeth

仅供参考。。。

第三段，the family the career ,都把the 去掉，第四段，female sailor 忍不住做了个同题作文，我也是（这只是本人的意见——英语专业研究