求批改英语作文，满分10分，求分数求评语

1、we were went to the hot spring,I like swimming,and I good at swimming.
上面这句不能用were,直接去掉即可.spring后面的逗号改为句号亩宴链.I good at swimming应改为I am good at swimming
2、In here,去掉。
3、cala是不是想说可乐，若是可乐，应迅孙改为cola.另外这句中的顿号祥塌改为逗号。
4、On the noon改为at noon.
5、 I felt busy because I had a lot of homework.,but I think I can finish it,maybe…
上面这句中的标点需要仔细改一下。

第一段 because前春蚂不需加标点 把大写变小御塌写
第二段 we were went把were去掉 隔扒拆埋行and i good at 加上am
we not only swiming or enjoy hot spring,we can eat something and drink something变成swim 然后spring后面加上butalso
不是on the noon 是at noon
是eat rice 不是rich
go swimming前面是and
其他差不多
打分的话6分。