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Remember last week, the day was Juan Zi's birthday, the day the very lively, a lot of people, the morning she invited some friends to his birthday party, in his home we play good fun, delicious cake and all kinds of snacks. Afternoon we went to the park, watching animals, ride on the roller coaster, but also into the haunted house, their girls to cry, that one day is worth the aftertaste.

回忆上个星期，内天是娟子的生日，那天好热闹的，好多人，上午她邀请了几个好朋友去参加他的生日聚会，在他的家里我们玩的好尽兴，有美味的蛋糕与各式的小吃。下午我们又去了公园，看了动物，坐了过山车，还进了鬼屋，把他们女生都要吓哭了，那一天真是值得回味。

Last Sunday was Juanzi's birthday. In the morning she invited some friends including me to attend her birthday party, which was held in her house. We ate her birthday cake and drank some Coca-Cola. She was dressed in a red beautiful dress. In the afternoon we went to the park together to take some photos. How happy we were!
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