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Dear aunt
It was happy to see your you e-mail. It is fun to get e-mail from Australia. you have lived Australia for ten year. I miss you very much. I am happy to tell you Beijing 's now.
Beijing changes more and more beautful. Beijing has a lot of placess of interest.Beijing's steet very busy. Beijing's people are fashion.
I wish you to back home, because I miss you very.
Best wishes.
yours
Ai hua
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Dear aunt
How are you?I miss you so much.After reading your letter , I am glad to tell you that great changes have taken place in Beijing and it becomes a modern city now.In the cental of the city,there are many tall buildings. People dress fashionably and are busy all the day. Beijing is not the one that it used to be.I really hope that someday you can see it in person.
Best wishes.
Yours
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i'm so sorry ,i've never been to beijing ,could you tell me what beijing is like now? please.