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My name is zhang lin.I'm a boy of 15.I'm a student of yang middle school.I hometown is a city of shudu.I have many hobbies such as collecting,stamps,traveling,playing football,playing computer ganmes,singing English song and so on.I aslo not good at dancing ,playing musical and instuments.I don't like to stay at home.

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My name is Zhang Lin. I am a 15-year-old boy. I am form City of Shudu and now I am studying in Ming Yang Middle School. I like playing sports. I like to play football best and I can play it well. On weekends, I often play football with my friends. I also like computer games. I think they can make me feel relaxed. And I like collecting stamps,traveling and singing English songs. I like singing songs,I like music but I don't like to play instruments. I think it's difficult for me. In fact,I don't like dancing either. I am out-going,so I don't like to stay at home. What about you?

My name is Zhang Lin. I am a 15-year-old schoolboy. I live in City of Shudu. And I am in Ming Yang Middle school. I like collecting stamps and travel very much. And my favourite sport is football. I also like to play computer games ang listen to English song. I don't like dacing. And I don't like stay at home playing musical instruments, either.