2011广东高考英语作文 想家 要怎么写

One possible version:
The passage told us that a student, Sam was sent to a boarding school, in which he very missed his parents, so he got sick and could not focus his attention on his lessons.
In fact, in real life, everyone can have an experience of feeling homesick. I remember when I was 10 years old, because my parents was busy, I was sent to my uncle’s in another city. Here, I studied for two years. Although my aucle and his family were kind to me, I still felt homesick. At first, I couldn’t sleep well, because I didn’t adapt to the climate there. And, because different teachers have different teaching methods, it was difficult for me to understand the lesson. Besides, I was new for the students there, I hardly had friends. I felt very lonely.
As days went on, I slowly adapted to the new environment. I actively communicated with my new students and made friends with them. My homesick gradually disappeared.

内容是很好了 关键看你有没有用纯正的英文习惯来写 怕你不能用英语诠释的很红
英语作文的分数 内容其实不怎么重要 格式 语法 文体 甚至字迹都是很重要的

这种作文最主要是把情感融入文章中！

我觉着应该行 就是最后貌似有点跑题 不过看盘卷的怎么理解了 英语作文一般如果没有时态人称上的硬伤 应该不会给太低

重点写一下想家的心理、感受，写出真情实感才能得高分。