托福作文 请大家帮我指导一下 谢谢 第一次写 求拍!

2024-12-30 16:09:43
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The point is clear and is very easy to understand but the reasons are not that persuasive, especially the second. You need to tell the readers WHY you choose fundamental education for children but not HOW/ WHAT TO DO.