请各位英语高手帮忙修改一下语法的错误、、、

第一段：第二行第二词“emphasis”改为emphasize，前者是名词，应改为动词形式。
第二行的students are lacking of中的of改为in，lack只有做名词时后才可以接of。还有，此句最好改为：students are lacking in the environment for their practicing oral English.

第二段：第一行：开头处删掉一个teaching
第二行：把resulting in 改为results in,因为but连接的前后句是同等地位的。
第三行：causes of these difficulties arises中的arises改为arising，动名词做介词宾语。句末用address不合适，而且语法错误。应改为attempts to provide some measures to solving the problems.

第三段：第一句话没有谓语，而且你用re-light为何意我不太懂。。。建议将the idea后的逗号去掉，将leading改为lead；do not attach改为not attaching.随后一句改为：The rigdidity of teaching leads to the fact that students hardly get improvements.
之后的Third 后加一个逗号，learning and teaching environment后的is改为are 。
后面改为：Forth, what students learn is less related to student practice materials ,which results in students not being enthusiastic.Fifth，the lack of vocabulary limits the students' verbal fluency.
你的第六点我实在是没有看懂，所以不知道该怎么改，但是语法错误太多了，建议你删去。

最后一段：第一句：First, emphasize oral teaching. Oral teaching should be regarded as important as both speaking and writing ,
第二句：Second,improve the teaching method and enrich the teaching form to .....
第三句：Third,vary th teaching materials
段末：willingly to say

好过分这么长