帮我看看这篇英语作文写得好不??

2024-11-30 17:32:32
推荐回答(5个)
回答1:

整体不错。给些建议吧:把一句去掉一个Chinese。
We can also call it ……
We usually have a big family dinner at New Year. At the dinner,we have a lot of food,such as ……
We share happiness and say "hanppy new year!" with each other.
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回答2:

这篇还不错只不过有些错误:
chicken改成chickens
have a delicioue dinner改成have delicioue dinner
有问题再补充,望采纳!

回答3:

非常不错,条理清晰,很有天赋哦,加油!祝考好成绩!
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回答4:

第一句我帮你改成一句初三的句子:Chinese New Year which also called Spring Festival is a traditional festival.

回答5:

不错,可以再誊一遍,尽量别用改正带之类的东西