【英语诗歌译吧】原创诗歌翻译两首,多谢指点!谢谢!

2024-12-19 08:36:59
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回答1:

(1)真爱的感觉
The Feeling of True Love

爱情是勇敢者的游戏,
Love is a game for the brave,
不能怕被伤害,
Don't fear that you might be hurt,
必须接受痛苦。
You must accept pain.
就象参加“爱情的世界杯”
Just like going to a "World Cup for Love"
进入决赛,
The one who enters the finals,
就没有失败者。
Is not a loser.
冠军只有一个,
Winner is one and only,
亚军不得不面对现实。
The runner-up must face failure.
在爱情考官面前,
Before the judge of love,
他懂得了什么是“珍惜爱情”,
If he understand how to cherish love,
那就是他的收获了,
Then that means he has learnt and grown,
无论她谁选择谁做她的男朋友,
No matter who she chooses as her boyfriend,
我知道我是个好男人,
I know that I'm a good man,
不是我不优秀,
Not that I'm not outstanding,
仅仅是她个人的选择,
It's merely her personal preference,
我有勇气去面对,
I have the courage to face it,
但必须要追赶,
But I must pursue,
直到最后......
Till the end......

(2)
超越阳光
Racing with the Sun

宇宙中有无数的光线在折射着,
Infinite rays shine in the universe,
而阳光是最闪亮的,
But the sun is the brightest,
每天看着日出日落的,
Everyday the sun rises and falls,
阳光将身上最灿烂的光线射向远方,
Shining its brightest rays to the farthest place,
而那些需要阳光的Lucky Dog期盼着,
And these lucky dogs who awaits sunlight awaits,
微微地赐予他们一些力量,勇气……
Hoping for some strength and courage......
自然界中的紫水晶算不上最晶莹透彻的,
The amethyst in mother nature isn't the most translucent,
但确是最有灵性的,
But it has the most wonderful feel,
只要阳光将一点光线撒给她,
If the sun shines only a little on her,
她就折射出绚丽多彩的故事,
She could reflect upon many beautiful stories,
而那晶莹的色彩已经完全超越了.
And her shining color has completely surpassed,
超越了阳光给予的七彩的光环,
Surpassed the sun's shine of the rainbows,
做出更丰富的自己,
And make the most out of herself,
彻底摆脱了束缚,飞向远方了。
Completely free of strain, flying into the distance.

阳光不企图什么,
Sun's desires are empty,
总在想啊,
Always think about,
世界上比阳光更需要帮助的还很多,
How these in the world who need sunlight are of a great number,
阳光总要有日出日落的,
The sun always will rise and fall,
就在日出最绚丽的时候,
And when it's at its most glorious,
多给予万物吧。
Please give much to the everything,
毕竟他们都都需要阳光的帮助,
Because they need the help from the sun,
超越阳光,
Surpassing the sun,
或许很难,
Might be quite hard,
但做到独特,
But being spcial,
对于阳光来说,
To the sun,
业已经超越了……
Has already surpassed it......

回答2:

Love is a game which belongs to the person who is brave.
爱情是勇敢者的游戏
Do not be afraid of being hurt feeling,
不能怕被伤害,
having to accept the ache.
必须接受痛苦。
Just like joining the "Cup World of Love",
就象参加爱情的世界杯一样。
entering the finals ,
进入决赛的
there is no failture,
不存在失败者
Only having one champion,
冠军只有一个
the runner-up have to face to music,
亚军必须面对失败
to understand what is a loser in the front of the Judge of Love.
在爱情的考官面前去理解什么是失败
He has learned how to take care of the Love carefully,
他已经学会如何珍惜爱情,
that's harvest which he got it.
那就是他的收获了
no matter who she choose him as her boyfriend,
无论她选择谁做她的男朋友
I knew that I was a good man.
我必须知道我是个好男人
Not being a wonderful,
不是我不优秀
Only her own choice.
仅仅是她的个人选择
I have a couragement to face it,
我有勇气面对一切
Having to chase her,
但我必须要全力追赶
Until i am ......
直到最后!

2) surmounting
sunlight universe has the innumerable lights in to refract,
but the sunlight is most glistens,
every day watches the sunrise sunset,
sunlight body on brightest light direction of fire distant place,
but these need sunlight Lucky Dog was hoping for,
grants them slightly some strengths, the courage ......
In the nature amethyst is not most crystal clear thorough,
but really is most intelligential,
so long as the sunlight scatters light for her,
she refracts the gorgeous story,
but that crystal clear color already completely surmounted.
Had surmounted seven color corona which the sunlight gives,
makes richer own,
got rid of the fetter thoroughly, flew to the distant place.
The sunlight does not attempt any,
always in thinks,
in the world needs to help the sunlight very to be also more than,
the sunlight must have the sunrise sunset,
is most gorgeous at the sunrise,
gives the myriad things.
They all all need the sunlight help, the surmounting
sunlight,
very to be perhaps difficult after all,
but achieves uniquely,
regarding the sunlight,
already passes through had surmounted ......

回答3:

(1) Love is the feeling brave love of the game, not for fear of injury, must accept the pain. As the "Love World" into the finals, there were no losers. Only one champion, the first runner-up had to face the reality. Love examiners in the face, he knew what "treasure Love" is his harvest. Whatever her choice who is her boyfriend who, I knew I was Gehaonanren, not me, not outstanding, She is just a personal choice, I have the courage to face, but must catch up, until the last ...... (2) There are countless light beyond the sun in the universe reflects, and the sun is shining. Watching the sunrise and sunset every day, the sun was the brightest light shoot from afar. Lucky Dog and look forward to those sunny, a little to give them some strength, courage…… The thorough nature of the favorites is not really the most extraordinary, but it is the most intelligent, as long as the sun will light spreading to the point she She reflected on the glorious story What color is completely beyond the glistening. Colorful beyond the sun's halo, and make themselves rich. shake off the shackles, the flying distance. What is not an attempt to sunlight, always think ah, the world also needed more help than a lot of sun, the sun must have sunrise and sunset. in the most beautiful sunrise, giving more things right. After all, they need the help of the sun, beyond the sun, perhaps difficult, but I do unique, sunshine, has gone beyond it……

回答4:

The love is the game, Cannot fear is injured, Must accept the pain. On likely participates in "the love World Cup" Enters the finals, Does not have the loser. The champion only, The second place can not but face the reality. In front of love examination official, He had understood any is "treasures the love", That was his harvest, Regardless of her who chooses who to be her the boyfriend, I knew I am a good man, Is not I is not outstanding, Merely is her choice, I have the courage to face, But must have to pursue, Until finally......

Surmounting sunlight In the universe has the innumerable lights to refract, But the sunlight is most glistens, Every day watches the sunrise sunset, Sunlight body on brightest light 射向 distant place, But these need sunlight Lucky Dog is hoping for, Slightly grants them some strengths, the courage... ... In the nature is not most crystal clear thorough, But really is most having mystical powers, So long as the sunlight scatters light for her, She refracts the gorgeous story, But that crystal clear color completely had already surmounted Had surmounted seven colors corona which the sunlight gives, Makes richer own, Thoroughly got rid of the fetter, flew to the distant place. The sunlight does not attempt any, Is always thinking, In the world needs to help the sunlight very to be also morethan, The sunlight must have the sunrise sunset, On is most gorgeous at the sunrise, Gives the myriad things.

回答5:

1)the felling of the true love

The love is the game of the brave,
Can't fear is hurt,
Have to accept pain and sufferings.
Attend"the world cup of the love" for the elephant
Enter finals,
Have no failed.
The champion onlies have a,
The second prize have to face reality.
Test officer's in front in the love,
What he know to BE"cherish love",
That be he harvest,
Regardless she who choice who do her boyfriend,
I know I am a good man,
Isn't I ain't excellent,
Only is she is personal choice,
I am courageous to face,
But have to chase,
Keep till the last......

(2)
Surmount sunlight

There are numerous rays in the cosmos Be refract,
But the sunlight is the most shining,
Looking at the sunrise sunset everyday,
Sunlight body the most brilliant ray shot into far-away place,
But those Luckies Dogs that need sunlight expect,
Give their some strength tinily, courage ……

The amethyst in the nature calculate not ascend the most radiant and very clear of,
But indeed is there is innate intelligence most ,
As long as the sunlight give°s some ray her,
She refracts a gorgeous and colorful story,
But that radiant color has already surmounted completely.
Surmounted sunlight to give of seven colourful aureoles,
BE a more abundant oneself of,
Got away from tie thoroughly, fly toward far-away place.

The sunlight attempt what,
Always Be think,
Even need to help than the sunlight in the world of still a lot of,
The sunlight always has to be had the sunrise sunset,
At the sunrise is the most gorgeous of time,
Give much creation.
After all they all all need the help of the sunlight,
Surmount sunlight,
Probably very difficult,
But attain special,
Say for the sunlight,
Already through surmount ……