亲爱的英语高手，请帮我看看我新翻译的英语句子的语法对不对

要求不高也要先提醒一下常出现的问题要注意：
1. 冠词、磨槐冠词、还是冠词。你常仔迟常不用冠词，甚至当中文里有"一个'的时候有不用英文的"a"。用的时候，总忘记在元音开头瞎戚友的名词前，不定冠词是"an"而不是"a"。另外，seeking the truth是指找出一件事的真相，而一般的寻找真理不应该用定冠词，是seeking truth。
2. 主语。你的句子里最混乱的就是主语。主语可以加定语来修饰，但是你仍然要记住主语是哪个词，而不能另写一个新的词当主语。Science as a process of research , it is mainly...这句，本来Science是主语的，但是你写完了定语之后，把原来的主语忘了，又写了个it当主语。这种情况发生好几次了。

词汇：
科学共同体 scientific community
个人角度 personal perspective
漫长 protracted
曲折 tortuous
之所以 the reason that
深奥性 profoundness
隐秘性 covertness
无限性 limitless
渗透 permeate
理论评价 theoretical evaluation
不可或缺的 crucial

改正过的正文：
Science as a process of research, is mainly deployed by the subject of scientific research, the scientific community and the scientists or people of science. Even from the personal perspective of a scientist, the process of scientific research is a protracted, tortuous, and complicated process filled with both sweetness and bitterness. The reason that scientific research is a protracted and complicated process, is primarily determined by the profoundness, covertness, and limitless of the object of research (the reality) as well as the thought process of the research subject. Science as a process of research activity and a maker of spiritual products, has some unique characteristics. Nonetheless, we still emphasize that seeking truth and relying on proof make up the essential features of the process of a scientific activity. Seeking truth runs from the start of a scientific activity to its end. Relying on proof permeates all of the basic and applied research activities, and is crucial for the processes of both scientific invention and theoretical evaluation.

Science as a research activity, mainly by the scientific community that is the subject of scientific research, scientists or scientific people started.
Even from the perspective of individual scientists, scientific research activities is also a long, tortuous, complex and full of ups and downs of the process
The reason why scientific research activities is a long and complex process, mainly by the study (objective reality) of the esoteric nature, and the hidden and infinite nature of the thought processes of the main decisions.
The spirit of science as a research activity or the production process, with some unique features.
However, we still have to emphasize that the pursuit of truth and resort to prove that the process of scientific activities constitute essential characteristics. Pursuit of truth through the scientific activities always, resort to prove that penetration in all base
Basic research and applied research activities, inventions and theories within the scientific evaluation process is essential even for a moment.

Science as a research activity, is mainly composed of scientific research subject namely science community, scientists or scientific American launch.
Even the scientists personal point, scientific research activities are also a long and tortuous, complex and full of suantiankula process
Scientific research activities are a long and complicated process, is mainly caused by the research object (objective reality) of esoteric sex, confidentiality and limitless and research subject thought process sexual decision.
Science as research activities or spiritual production process, with some unique features.
However, we still want to emphasize, to seek truth and resort to proof constitutes the essence of scientific process characteristics. To pursue truth throughout scientific activities throughout, resort to proof permeability in all base
Besides art1 function and applied research activity, it in scientific inventions and theoretical evaluation process is an instant indispensable.你对着看看吧 你语法没有问题的

不错，语法都对