大学四级作文:对我影响最深的人英文该怎么构思?

谁对你影响最大呢？当然是父母了。
Who affects me most?
I believe that there must be some teachers who left you a deep impression in your life.
Of course,there has been a teacher in my life who left me a deep impression.
That was my English teacher in my university,Miss Xu.She had a long blonde hair and beautiful eyes.
She was a kind teacher and worked hard.She was far from the school so she had to catch the early bus everyday!
How exhausted.She had not only critic our English homework and take care of her baby.I wasn't intersted in English at than time.She told me to talk in English as much as possible.She asked me not to be afraid of making mistakes because everyone makes mistakes.But she always forgot small things,like her glasses and money!
Well,now I chat with her on phone once a week.I really miss her because of her blonde hair,beautiful eyes,forgetting,distance and reasbonsbilities.