能帮我再修改一下吗(我是上次让你修改英语文章的那个)

2024-12-20 15:11:39
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回答1:

初二可能还没有学到定语从句吧,我把里面的定语从句改一改吧,再加两句表示心情的话。希望能帮到你。
It happened in the morning one month ago,and I have not forgotten it since then.
That morning,I slept too late, and I hate being late because it would make me unhappy. So I had a quick breakfast. And at the time, my grandmother was keeping talking to me. She was trying to comfort me and asked me to take care. And she repeated the words for a million times and I got very angry. I yelled at her,"You re annoying! you really are a pain!" At my word, she said nothing. Although grandma said nothing about what happened in that morning, I felt something different deep in her heart. She might have get hurt by my words. In fact, I was deeply touched and grateful for my grandma's love to me.
I would never forget that thing, and it reminds me how my grandmother loves me!This thing made me feel guity for my careless words.
It was my fault to let her down and I will bear the thing in my heart so that I will not let it happen again.

回答2:

你链接了吧……