求高手帮批改一下我的英语作文~谢谢啦！

well your english is pretty good! below is the corrected composition
The pictures present a very familiar sightin modern society：In the first picture of 30 years ago, a pretty young mother leadsher lovely little daughter hand in hand and walks down the street. In thesecond picture, nowadays, the elderly mother is supported by her daughter’sfirm arm, with a smile on her face. And below these drawings, there is a topic:supporting each other.
Obviously, the real purpose ofthe artist is not the pictures itself, but to lead us to find what hides behindthem， that is, parents and children should support each other.Firstly, for many adults, they received nearly all of their parents’ love and carewhen they were little boys or girls. About 87% of the parents said that they spentmost of their time and paid attention on their sons or daughters, according toa recent survey reported by the Oct.28 issue of Reader’s Digest. Second, it isa traditional virtue for Chinese to respect the aged and care for the young.
To sum up, much attentionshould be paid to the supporting between parents and children. My attitude isthat when we were young, our parent cared for and helped us as much as they can.Now, it is time for us to return them. Such as, we could help our mother dohouseworks. Although some of the Chinese traditional virtue are determining,one tradition that should be never faded away is that of taking care of theelderly.

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