写作思路:要直接简化任务语言。在叙述中,我们要把直接叙述变成间接叙述,尽可能简化人物语言。这样,即使情节连贯,又使语句“简练”。
My family.
我的家人。
I live with my parents and grandparents. My grandpa retired 10 years ago. He is still energetic.
我和我的父母和祖父母住在一起。我爷爷十年前退休了。他仍然精力充沛。
My grandma is a warm-hearted lady with grey hair. She is always nice to me. My father works in a company.
我奶奶是一位热情的白发女士。她总是对我很好。我父亲在一家公司工作。
He is tall and serious. My mom is pretty and kind. She is busy in her work. I have a happy family.
他高大而严肃。我妈妈又漂亮又善良。她工作很忙。我有一个幸福的家庭。
英语作文.
My family.
I live with my parents and grandparents. My grandpa retired 10 years ago. He is still energetic. My grandma is a warm-hearted lady with grey hair. She is always nice to me. My father works in a company. He is tall and serious. My mom is pretty and kind. She is busy in her work. I have a happy family.
文章很好,不过如有中文更好😁😁
非常不错!读起来让人爽快。