求一篇名为 my winter holiday plan 的英语作文

My Winter Holiday I have a happy winter holiday, because I go to many places First, I go to Liannan to climb mountains and visit some old houses. Then I go to Longmen. In the evening, we go to the hot spring. My mother's friend says, "There are many squirrels in Nankun mountain!" That's very interesting! I want to see monkeys very much. But we don't have time to go there. I am so sad! Later, we go to other places, such as Xi Qiao, Guangzhou, etc. I love my colourful winter holiday! What about your holiday? 动词ing形式是一般现在时啊，你那是计划寒假的事应该是将来时吧 追问： 老师叫的 回答： 这样写应该没错，如果必须你就把动词后面加ing就行了。我在帮你改一下吧My Winter Holiday I have a happy winter holiday, because I going to many places I going to Liannan to climb mountains and visiting some old houses. I going to Longmen. In the evening, we are going to the hot spring. My mother's friend says, "There are many squirrels in Nankun mountain!" That's very interesting! I want to see monkeys very much. But we don't have time to go there. I am so sad! we are going to other places, such as Xi Qiao, Guangzhou, etc. I love my colourful winter holiday! What about your holiday?行了

这里有一篇，你参考一下 My Winter Holiday My winter holiday is very dull. I stay at home for most of time. Sometimes I visit my friends and play basketball with them. Sometimes we go shopping. One day, we go to the KFC. We have hamburgers, chicken coke and French fries. We have sore throats. We go home and have a rest. Then we feel better. We go and play computer games! How mad we are! This is the only thing I can talk about in the holiday 若满意望采纳