麻烦帮我看看这篇英语短文，修改一下错误的地方

This is a photo of my family. (加is)

This is my father.He is very humourous. （He改为This）

This is my mother,and she is a teacher.She is talking with my consins.
（That改为This，cousin 改为 cousins）

These are my two cousins. （Those 改为 These）

The old man is wearing glasses.He has grizzled hair. He is my grandpa. （had 改为 has）

We are in the park on a fine day! （had 改为 on a ）

The old man is wearing glasses改为The elder man is wearing glasses。
He had grizzled hair.改为He has grizzled hair.
We are in the park had fine day! 改为We are in the park and have fine day!
要保持全文时态的一致

最后一句：We had a fine day in the park.其他没什么问题了。