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正文:
My Favorite Sport There are many kinds of interesting sports,such as basketball, football,swimming and running,but the most I like is swimming。When I was a little child,my father took me to the river which near my house to learn swimming。
Then,I found it's really fun and cool when I swim in the water,especially in summer,It's the most exciting thing to do when summer comes。I like swimming。It's so wonderful。
有很多种有趣的运动,比如说篮球,足球,游泳和跑步,但是我最喜欢的是游泳。当我还是个小孩的时候,我父亲就带我到附近的河里学游泳。后来,我发觉游泳真的很有趣,在水里游的时候很凉快,特别是在夏天。当夏天到来的时候,最令人兴奋的事就是游泳。我喜欢游泳,感觉好极了。
I like sports. In many sports events. I like running and jumping rope very much. Because when you run, you only use your hands to swing your hands and legs. Don't worry about anything else, relax. Skipping is a sport that helps digestion most after eating. In fact, there are still many sports. So we must pay attention to sports.
My favourite sport is playing football.Because every team has 11 persons,we can play
together. It makes me health.
I like sports. In many sports events. I like running and jumping rope very much. Because when you run, you only use your hands to swing your hands and legs. Don't worry about anyth
我还是从前那个少年。