帮忙改错(我翻译的英语文章)

Human Life
By Yumufenglin
Translated by chh317

When we are little things (we are little 加了thing感觉有点中国话)
We start to know that there are two kinds of people in the world
——the kid and the adult

Later we realized that there are two kinds of people （realize 因为你通篇都在用现在时）
——the good people and the bad people （and the bad one 避免重复使用people）

When we are teens, we try to understand the diffrences between the two people （understand - grasp 感觉更能表现出 try 的非常努力 two types of people）
——the male and the female

Later when we grow up, we divide the people into two kinds
——the successful man and failed man （the success and the loser）

Years later, we argue that there are two kinds of people
——the rich and the poor
No! that's unfair （not fair）

As our sons and daugters grow up rapidly,
We sigh for the time flowing year by year. （sigh over ; fleeing year after year）
Until then, we found that the people should be divided into these two kinds
——the happy and the unhappy

Finally, we think about the questions between these two kinds of people (conclude the question as these two kinds of people)
——the dead and the alive
Then, the human life end in peace. (ends)
That's the human life

little things 可以改成young
Later we realize that there are two kinds of people
——the good people and the bad people
the successful man and failed man改成the success and the failure
flowing-passing

When we WERE YOUNG，
We LEARNED there are two kinds of people in the world
——the kidS and the adultS

Later we realized that there are two kinds of people
——the good people and the bad ONE

When we WERE TEENAGE, we TRIED to SEPARTE people FROM PEOPLE
——the male and the female

Later when we grEw up, we divideED the people into two TYPES
——the successful man and UNSUCCESSFUL man

Years later, we argueD that there are two kinds of people
——the rich and the poor
No! that's unfair

As our sons and daugters grow up rapidly,
We sigh for the time flowing year by year.
Until then, we found that the people should be divided into these two kinds
——the happy and the unhappy

Finally, we think about the questions between these two kinds of people
——the dead and the alive
Then, the human life end in peace.
That's the human life