帮我看一下这段英语短文有语法错误么？谢谢

2025-02-27 20:36:34

推荐回答（2个）

回答1：

Yes,unlike south,where is(非限定性定语从句) so hot in summer,Mudanjiang has a cozy weather.Though so many people think it’s really cold in the winter, when it comes (though和but不能同时用，一句话内只能用一个，去掉哪一个都可以）,the snow is(用一般现在时就可以) very beautiful .What’s more,people can make a snowman with friends(朋友应用复数形式，根据语义可知） and family outside（outside为副词，表示在外面，前面不用介词） and will feel very happy, meanwhile,government will build（will后加动词原形） a snow castle that tourist and resident can come(can情态动词，后加动词原形） here and play together（“来这玩”是汉语式的英语，最好改成这样，用and连接两个并列短语),which is all made of ice(be made of由...制作) .And at night ,the colorful light which puts on the ice will all be lit up(用被动形式),you will feel living in fairy tales world.At last I want to say,Mudanjiang doesn’t(第三人称单数） have too much pressure to live in,and when you get here （here是副词，前面不用介词）,you will feel relaxful(relax是动词，此处应为形容词） and comfortable,you can don’t worry about the natural disasters here either （否定句中的 ”也“ 用either）.If you want to see some scenic spots,Jingpo Lack and so many beautiful scenes are (都用复数形式）all the good choice.
大概就改这样了，有一些可能也不太对，参考着来吧

回答2：

艾玛这得好好改改啊这 Yes,unlike south that is so hot in summer.Mudanjiang having a cozy weather.Though so many people think it’s really cold in the winter, snowing is such a beautiful scene.
What’s more,people can make a snowman with friend and family in the outside and feel very happy.In winter,government will building a snow castle At last, I want to say,Mudanjiang don’t have so much pressures to live in,and you will feel relax and comfortable

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