Dear Sir or Madam,
I am one the students in (XXXXX) School. I have been studying under a XXXX(China's or other's) school program for (XXX) years. After graduate from this school, I will receive a (XXXX) high school diploma. During my school time, I sew lots of developed ideas and advanced technology from America. For this reason, I have a strong wish to continue my future study in US.
It is a great opportunity to be a student under the American educational system. I hope to study abroad in a American university in order to benefit my future career as (an engineeror 随便你学的什么职业). I feel a great honor to have been conditionally accepted into the Bachelor of Science in (Engineering at the University of XXXXX). I was so fascinated by the (Mechanical engineering program) when I first saw it on the booklet of (University of XXXXX). Due to my father is running a Machine Tool company which is called (XXXXXXXXX), and he used to be (a mechanical engineer). Therefore, it is so determined for me to be (a mechanical engineer). Also, I am so pleased to find that the University of (XXXXX) has a very high academic reputation and lots of advanced laboratory . I believe that those professors will offer me a great help in my further study. In a result, America and University of (XXXXX) is absolutely my best choice.
If I can become a student of the University of (XXXXX), I will work hard and finish my (mechanical engineering program) in the next four years. It is a wonderful way to achieve my dream and reflect my value to the society.
After I finish my studies, I am going to return to China. Also this is my original purpose to go abroad and study (science) because China’s (science and technology) is still like a baby in the cradle; we still get chances to contribute in this land. Also my father’s machine company is developing rapidly; he needs amount of people with skills and knowledge. After I graduate from the University of (XXXXX), I am sure that I will be the person he wants. It will be a perfect life while I help my father and also contribute to my country at the same time. And with my bilingual skills and academic achievements in America, I believe that I will bring my father’s company to the world some day in the future.
Thank you for considering my application.
Yours truly,
括号里的东西都换成与你实际情况符合的,总之让他们相信第一你有被录取了, 你对这个专业有兴趣,还有你最后会回中国。(当然这些都不一定,但是尽量写的让他信)
希望能帮到你 好运
自己写!!!
虽然我态度不好,可是你想想,等你到了那边学校,你写作业到哪里找模板呢?与其到时候着急,不如趁着现在有时间和精力,好好研究一下英文写作,会对你很有帮助的。个人很反对用模板,因为永远没有长进。。。