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请帮我修改我写的英文句子请帮我修改语法或不对的地方谢谢!!!!!!!!

2025-03-11 06:34:11

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回答1：

lifeEnglishman的英语很好，表达比较地道，我只从语法层面上给你修改：
第一篇时态有点乱，最好用一般过去时,比如：
I pay a lot of attention to watch and observing every child’s
action and emotion.最好改为：
I paid a lot of attention to watching and observing every child’s
action and emotion.
最后那个there kids 是什么？~those kids or their kids?

第二篇还是时态混乱
they seems like don’t remember me at all, 主谓不一致，多个谓语动词并存，需改动

I play with these kids and doing my observation as
well. and连接两个谓语要并列啊，应该改为I played with these kids and did my observation as
well.
because it was lunch time, so I help the educator to set up the table and chair
for children,because和so不能连用，去掉so
most of them are very interest and happy to
play finger printing, interest 应改为interested

every child have different interest, some of
children does like to play fingerprinting, some of them does not.
主谓不一致：错误的主谓搭配:every child have;some of children does like ```自己修改吧

回答2：

It’s my first day for doing my internship, I feel a little bit nervous when I have to start working with children. During today’s internship, I pay a lot of attention to watch and observing every child’s
action and emotion.
请修改为以下的句子

It was the first day for me to work as an intership. I felt a little nervous while I was beginning to work with children, During my today's working period as an internship, I have paid much attention to watching and observing the action and emotion of every child who was around me

满意，请立即采纳，谢谢！

回答3：

先改一段吧
It’s the first day of my internship.

I felt a little nervous when I have to start working with children.

Today I paid a lot of attention to watching and observing every child’s
action and emotion.

I played with them most of the time, and I cleaned the toy
for them.

When the educator changed diapers for children, I watch how she cleaned
their pee and poo.

I also observed children's and educator’s routine.

When I finished today’s observation, I have learnt so much about taking care of children, especially those for toddler age group.

It is hard to become an educator, because they have to do almost everything for kids.

回答4：

#2
I play with these kids and doing my observation as well---played?

we go back to the classroom---went??

那个observe 是想表达什么意思？第三段的interest的用法是否正确呢

We can not to
forces some of them to participate in the same activities,---we can not forces some.........

鄙人水平一般，互相交流，不喜勿喷

回答5：

牛人，你教我英语吧……

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请帮我修改我写的英文句子 请帮我修改语法或不对的地方 谢谢!!!!!!!!

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