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My name is **. I come from ** (province) **(city){直接说什么省什么市，例如：I come from Hebei Shijiazhuang}. I graduated from Department of Accounting, ** Economic Institute in 2003.

After I graduated, I worked in a advertising agency as a copy writer. And I’m impressed by the creativity of the advertising. When I work steady in a public institution, I learned sketch and gouache by myself. And I also did a part-time job online to do product sales planning for building materials. Because of the love of animation and the good prospects of animation industry, I registered for animation industry major in ** University. I hope that I can combine my economic basic knowledge and the experience of marketing sales as well as my favorite art together. I was working as I was doing a part-time job, and I was also preparing the exam of postgraduate schools. So my lift was over full life. But I enjoy the happy process. At present, I desire the chance of study in ** Institute to realize my dream. Because I believe that love is the beginning of learning.
In my impression, **city is a beautiful place. I had came here several years ago for work factors. The people here are all very kind, and the food is delicious. I like this city very much!

My name is ***.I come from the provincial capital of **Province,***(城市名).In the year 2003,I graduated from the institute of economics majoring accounting in ***(城市名).
After my graduation,my first job was acting as a copy writer in an advertising company.The unique creativity of the advertising industry leaves a deep impression on me.After I got a stable job in the public institution,I started to learn sketch and liquid powder bu myself.And I also did part-time job as a sales planner for the building materials of house fitting-up on the Internet.Duo to the love towards the animation and speaking highly of the animation industry's good foreground,I entered myself for an examination to the animation major in **University.I hope that I can combine the professional basic knowledge of economy and the practical marketing sales experience as well as the artistic form I am fond of together.Working and doing part-time job as well as taking postgraduate entrance exams at the same time,my life once was too rich.However,the processes were delighting.At present,I hope that thus dream can come true in the ***college for I believe that love is the beginning of the knowledge.

My impression on ** is,it is very beautiful place.Duo to my working factors several years ago,I once came here.People here are very friendly and the food is delicious.I am fond of the city.

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