兄弟或者妹子啊,姐觉得直译的话可能,也许比较难拿offer, 姐就换了个语调,请别介意: My current educational background and professional experience support my particular interest in your XXX program. I appreciate the opportunity to grow with your promising expertise in the field of XX. I look forward to sharing my gains from learning at XX (college name) and enjoying the challenges of a new career in China.
The education I have at present cannot handle some situations, if I could study in America,I will improve my capacity and education to easily find a job ,for that I think the level of major is not sufficient when I study in China.
With my current education background, I am not competent to some markets. I think my professional level is not enough in China. If I can study in the United States, my skills and qualifications will be upgraded, so that I can find a better job in China!
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