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Today I went to the shop in the center. I like that shop because the clothes in that shop are very fashion and also very cheap.
But the nagetive thing is that, because this shop is in the centre so that there are many people and cars. so crowd. The traffic jam often happen.

Today I went to the shop in the center. I like that shop because the clothes in that shop are very fashion and also very cheap.
But the nagetive thing is that, because this shop is in the centre so that there are many people and cars. so crowd. The traffic jam often happen. 有用么？