我只想说英文简历是不会有这么长段的内容,英文简历一般不用完整的句子,这应该是求职信里的内容.
个人觉得你的中文写得也不太好,特别是把缺点放在最后,更像是强调了自己的不足
我帮你重新用英语写了一遍
I have six-year work experience: five years in a factory and one year in a hotel. I dealed with all kinds of people and things. I not only have learnt how to get work done well, but also had a quality of hard work.
Although I was not graduated from a full-time college, I trust that I am a good self-study learner.
During this period, I required a Chinese Statistical Qualification. I trust I, although, am not very good at communicating with people, my hunger for knowledge, responsiblity and deliberation will contribute a lot to your company.