五年级英语小作文

my father is very kind and he loves me very much.He gratuated from college.He is tall and strong,and he is humourous.He always teach me how to deal with my questions.we love each other.
上面的回答有问题。
1.he is granduated from college不许用被动语态。他毕业是主动行为
2.funny虽为形容词，但是有滑稽之意，贬义，不适合
3.he often tell me how to study...
应用tells
4.college千不加the和其他冠词

My father is very kind and he is friendly to me.He is a university student.He is tall and strong.He is funny.he often teaches me to solve the problem.he loves me very much and I love him, too.

My father is very kind. He is freindly to me.He is a college.He is tall and strong.And he is also very interesting.He often teaches me do the homework.He also loves me very much.I love him ,too.

my daddy is very kind ,he loves me ,and he is granduated from college,strong and tall,and funny,he often tell me how to study,we love eache other.