In school,I was chosen as a host in several activities and I've won many awards in the reading contest.In addition,I 'm fond of medicine.Now I apply to become a student of 学校名.If accepted,I'd double my efforts to make greater contributions.
不知道这个行么~后面我又发挥了一点~
I participated the class and various campus activities as a host before,and liked reading,even got the first on the campus reading competition.I am very interested in medicine.Hoping can get in by your school.
这些是按你字面上翻译,,你自己在把一句句连贯一下就好了