英语作文我的国庆假期

Today is National Day, 60th anniversary of my homeland. The week-long holiday just begins. No one needs to work now. My parents and I have not gone out. We just sit in the couch and watch TV. We don’t want to miss the program, parade. We are all excited when we see such beautiful and magnificent scene. There are so many people gather together to celebrate the 60th anniversary. We all feel proud that there are many advanced weapons to secure our country. We all feel happy when 60 flower buses pass through Tian An Men. I think our country will have a prosperous future.

A visit to Beijing
On Oct 1st, the National Day of China this year, dad, mom and I went to Beijing on a package tour arranged by the travel agency. I was so happy because it's the first time that I visit the Great Wall.
The Great Wall, one of the greatest wonders of the world, was enlisted in the World Heritage in 1987.We took the bus to arrive at the foot of the Great Wall. I began to climb the dreamed Great Wall. At first I did not feel tired, but after I stepped a thousands of steps I felt tired and thirsty. At last, we stood on the highest point of the Great Wall. A Chinese saying goes like that, “you are not a real hero until you have climbed the Great Wall”. The landscape outside and inside the Great Wall was so beautiful in this autumn!
访问北京
今年在10月1日中国国庆日，爸爸妈妈和我由旅行社安排旅行到北京。我非常高兴，因为这是我第一次参观长城。
长城，是世界上最伟大的奇迹之一，在1987年被列入世界遗产。我们是乘坐公共汽车到达了长城脚下。有那么多人到过这里。起初我并没有感到疲倦，但在我走了数千步后我感到又累又渴。最后，我们站在长城的最高点。中国有句谚语“不到长城非好汉”。在今年秋天长城内外景观是如此美丽！

Holidays of National Day
National Day is coming ,I am every happy .Because I can do many things. So I can have a rest at home beacuse I am too tired in my school, I can visit my good frieds and my grandmather and grandfather.
or I with my pareths go to the zoos.or I can go shopping and busy clothes,food and drinks.But I must fininsh my homework ,study is the most important.I like Nation Day!

Is About My Natonal Day

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