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下面是三篇作文，你自己看看吧，内容可作适当加减。

1 My Hometown

Welcome to my hometown! Haimen is my hometown. It is a modern and busy town. It has a long history. There are many big supermarkets, beautiful gardens and good factories here. It is very easy to go shopping. You can see green hills, big trees and nice flowers. There are many restaurants in Haimen.
There are many good places to visit. There is a park and a big Shopping Mall. You can see films in Renmin Theatre. My school is one of the best schools in my hometown. It is on Changjiang Road. It is very beautiful. I hope you can come and visit soon.

思路：先说你的家乡在哪里，再用两个形容词概括一下它。然后可以用there be句型写出那边有什么（每个名词可以各用一个形容词修饰）。还可以用It is+adj.+to do sth.的句型表现出干什么怎么样（比如购物/交通很方便等）。接着介绍家乡有哪些旅游景点、特色小吃，每样用2-3句话描述，最后加一句希望大家来我们家乡。

2 My Favourite City

My favourite city is Shanghai. It is in the east of China. It is an international city. We can travel between Pudong and Puxi very conveniently. We can go shopping and go sightseeing easily. We can see the Oriental Pearl TV Tower, Suzhou Creek, People’s Square and so on. We can go shopping and have local snacks and go sightseeing in Shanghai. It is a very beautiful city.

思路基本同上一篇。

3

Yesterday was Sunday .
I got up at six yesterday .I had breafast at 6:30.
In the morning ,I did my math homework for two hours,then I had a resd .Next I went on to do some housework.
I fed my cat with some fish fist in the afternoom . I watched TV for harf an hours and played the paino .Then I visited my friends and talked about our studies .
I had a good time!

这篇就是把一天的活动安排，还有起床、吃饭等的时间、状况等用过去式写下来就可以了。

希望您满意！

3,Just as usual,yesterday I went to a market where is a very famous place in XXX with my friend.After that,I went to her house and listened to the music for a while and generally talked about our life,the universe and everything that is bugging us.very nice day as always.
1.My hometown is Shanghai,I've lived there since I was born.It's a quite big costal city which is famous for it's international trade and the fast-pace life of local people.anyway,I luv it
2.Well,my favorite city is my grandma's hometown,Wuyuan.Though Shanghai is also a good place,but personally,I prefer living in a relatively quiet city and being far away from the bustling outside world.So I think wuyuan is the best choice for me